This week over at Write on Edge
our prompt was short and sweet. (like me) :
Let’s lighten it up around here. And when I say lighten, I mean REALLY lighten.
This week’s assignment will require the fewest number of words ever: we want you to write a story – your choice of topic – as a tweet.
That’s right. One hundred and forty characters. Not words. Characters.
Make us laugh. Make us think. Make us want more.
I know that some of you aren’t going to be very happy
about not getting a long story :
I understand: you need your “fix” .
So being the giver I am,
I’m going to write you about 400 words for later
if you come back, you get them. *wink*
For now I am going to give you a small glimpse into what is happening in Italy:
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Marco broke their embrace first, looking down into Kimmy’s eyes.
“Hey, let’s get married, now, here in Positano.”
She answered with a kiss.
Of course if you want to read more about Kimmy, David & Marco
you can always do that Right Here.






















The fact that he has to look DOWN into her eyes makes me envision him TALL, dark and handsome. I love that.
Great way to lead us into the next part Kir!!!
Isn't this week's prompt something? Hahaha. For someone who has the tendency to write way more words than necessary, this is a tough one for me!!But to give us this glimpse of Kimmy and David as your response to the prompt… Aaaargh, thanks for the tease!!!! It got me feeling like when I watched the season's last episode of my favorite TV series, how they really saved the best for last, and then… left us hanging for the next 7-8 months!!! Thanks a lot, Kir! lol
You know I love it! You have crafted some very desirable characters throughout this love triangle
MORE! MORE NOW! (see, I can write a short note too)
Oh yes Marco is very handsome and dark…he's just about the perfect guy..but is the "perfect guy" for our Kimmy?
I can't wait to take you on the rest of the journey.
don't worry, it's only another 7 days my friend. I promise before Christmas you get all you want from these 3
thanks so much for reading and talking me through it, I am so excited for the stuff coming.
Hee! It's genius!*You* are genius!
Such a tease!
*blush* I am so not a genius. But you have no idea what's in store for these two.
One of my "best qualities"
ack Shell, you took the words straight from my fingers
Yes, lets!It's like when the soaps go on location! Sun drenched and exotic and spontaneous!
So sweet.
hee! she's not going to marry him.
Ahhh…my heart's melting. You know I'm routing for Kimmy and Marco. I'll be back!
Yay!!!! And I love that you used it to continue your story!
Love! Envious of those of you who could do this prompt. I couldn't get my brain around it.
YAY!!!
I'm sure this will hold me over til I can get my next full fix. Very clever choice of what you revealed, by the way.
SO glad you liked it
I know if you do it, it will be GREAT! I"m willing to read it. C'mon give it a try!
oh yes, i have readers that email me to tell me that they need their "fix" . I hate to disappoint
spoken like a woman who knows "something"
I know, I love Marco too!
oh it sounds Tawdry now. LOL. But that Marco, he wants Kimmy.
Nic, I couldn't "help it"
xo
Great tweet. I will be back for more!
Yay! That's super fun. Can I get married in Positano? Oh wait….
Now I'm going to have to go back and catch up. I've been very behind in my reading. But Marco sounds a bit to good to be true. Just sayin'.
Ooh. Sounds like a romance. I'll have to come back and catch up.
Oh you tease! What a perfect little glimpse. Can't wait to see where you take it from there, 'cause I'm sure there's a twist with these two. :>
OH NO! How can you do this to us? now we have to wait! hee hee definitely a cliff hanger!
More more more!!!!
Love it.
xx