Lance
It happened outside a CVS of all places, just a quick stop for some Tylenol. From across the street he caught a glimpse of blue and those legs he’d know anywhere.
Releasing the seat belt, he got out of the car and watched. She’d just left him and now here she was holding one small hand, her other swallowed up by a larger one.
For Lance the enemy never looked so menacing, even in matching red polo shirts and khaki shorts, they taunted him.
So I’ll fight for her, he thought, believing in that moment the victory would be his.
I’m hanging with Lance for his 100 word song prompt this week.
(thank you to Carrie and Steph for putting up with me while I wrote)
have YOU played yet? (it’s addictive)
This week’s song, REVOLUTION by the Beatles.
Nicely done Kir! Now that’s a revolution!
really??? did you like it??? I am always so happy when you enjoy one of these. THANK YOU!!!
I really did! I can picture his eyes narrowing as he thinks “so I’ll fight for her”.
I’m chair dancing about that
It freaks me out to see that name.
Sometimes its the weirdest moments when the revolution inside people, occurs. This was very real.
thank for singing 100 word song this week.
I could change his name for the series, would that be easier…I mean it’s NOT you Lance but I also don’t want you to feel “freaked out”
but thanks for stopping by, I do love when you visit.
Uh oh.
But I didn’t do anything. LOL.
I enjoy the hidden revolution going in here. It quite clear without being all in your face about it. His emotions are so well shown here. I can feel the revolution in my own gut.
oh you did…you always inspire me and just by saying “I’m here to help” made it easier to get past the block of what I wanted to say.
I’m glad you got it, that you could see him get ready for battle in this. I want him to feel that way, right now.
xo
And you were worried
. This worked really well with the song. That internal desire for change is always the strongest. And you just can’t stand between a man and the woman he loves…. A shame he never said anything years ago
I’m always worried, I mean seriously who wants to read MY STUFF? But thank you for talking me through some of it and letting me run. I really appreciate every little thing you do for me.
THANK YOU.
This also hints at how conflicted she is, having just left him but now already being dressed in matching shirts and khakis with her … husband yes? I think I am understanding the series correctly?
HI, thanks for coming over. She’s not conflicted, she just needs to be with her family too, the two people dressed alike are Zach her 3 yr old and her husband, she is still in her blue skirt. (I can only do so much with 100 words) The enemies of his being those 2 “men” ..does that make more sense?
I’m just glad you read it, that’s enough for me.
THANK YOU
I’m none to sure if this is a fight he want’s to take on – especially considering that “one small hand…”
This was great!
ah, thanks. You said it was “great”, that’s high praise from someone with your talent.
Lance is ready for the war, whatever it brings….I can’t wait to see where it takes both of them.
(Thanks for stopping by…it means a lot to me)
I said it was “great,” but only because it is!
And I can’t wait to see where this goes either =]
thank you …again, thank you. Your comments make my day.
I like the image of the two hands – one small, one big – holding hers. I thought of the red shirts like a red cape to a raging bull. Nice touch.
Oh I’m so glad you caught the red Tara, thank you. thank you for coming over to say Hi.