Grace felt Dante move inside her, every thrust a small abandonment.
He was sure now, denial would come later.
She yielded anyway, feeding her own addiction, her hips tipped in submission.
Clenching.
Clutching.
Her necklace bouncing, her body beseeching as his prayer of release, “oh God!” met her silent plea of “please stay”, both of them shuddering under the weight of their desires.
Dante whispered words she was certain were meant to merely placate not promise as her tears of shame mingled with devotion and love for him.
Grace crowned him, succumbing to sleep, quietly begging the angels for mercy.
Do you play 100 word Song yet?
Leeroy asked k to pick a song, this week, SHE TALKS TO ANGELS by the Black Crowes.
Oh. Wow. Just gorgeously hopeless and hopeful and wow.
wow. that was intense, hot, and beautiful all at once!
oh sigh the power, “please stay.” xo
This was a nice, positive, warm read to enjoy!
The line between words that promise and words that placate can be so hard to see sometimes. At times, even the one speaking them might not know the difference, and you’ve captured that hope just beautifully here.
I need a hanky. And maybe a fan.
I’ve got BOTH for you my friend. Thank you for just coming over…I owe you a long visit. xooxo
Whoaf. I have got to go back and read that again. Way too powerful to take it all in on the first pass.
is that good or bad??? did you like it the 2nd time??
I love seeing YOU here t…but you know that.
Very good, and the 2nd time was more enjoyable than the first! I simply love when something is so terribly erotic, and yet not “cheap.”
Color me stupid, but the bit about her bouncing necklace was what really brought the whole thing to life for me. Intense. Real.
nope t, you GOT THIS…I wrote this over and over again, but the necklace line never changed, I felt it was intregal to the submission. (I wanted ot ot be a cross but ran out of available words)
you compliment me: truly. I will write ero stuff with you anytime, you know that my friend.
Whoa…is it hot in here? Holy crap Kir, that was damn sexy!!
well from you…that is a comment and compliment I will FRAME. You made me smile so big, I turned around to my coworker and said “CARRIE LIKED IT!!!”.
every thrust a small abandonment…damn
wicked good write
Hi and thanks so much for coming over to read it. I’m humbled just by that. I’m so glad you liked it. Truly.
OMG! I think that is one of my all time favorite songs! Sad that I feel like I relate to most of it – call me crazy – or call me an artist.
Your imagery was wonderful, but enough left to the reader’s imagination to make it very intense.
Oh Tara, thank you so much. It was a little out of the box for me, I’m so glad it worked. I love when you visit. THANK YOU.
Very moving (ahem) piece. Seriously, though, it isn’t often that a really well written bit comes along about sex from a woman’s point of view. This is excellent.
OH Lou, wow. I don’t even know what to say. YOu thinking ANYTHING I write is good is a gift. I want to frame this comment. Plus you’re here, reading again. Made my day.
thank you.